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  • LIon have abig jaws it can kill at one moment .this is difficult thing to seen by us mmmm .Yes i know espicaly when seeing the prey die in view of us .However it do this i dont blame it .If it isnot hungry ,it will not do that .Ijust balme mankind about which we do on ourselfes nowdays .We killed each others and cheat . we do things the animals,, which didnt have a braine,, will never do

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    • LIon have abig jaws it can kill at one moment .this is difficult thing to seen by us mmmm .Yes i know espicaly when seeing the prey die in view of us .However it do this i dont blame it .If it isnot hungry ,it will not do that .Ijust balme mankind about which we do on ourselfes nowdays .We killed each others and cheat . we do things the animals,, which didnt have a braine,, will never do
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