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My self
Hi, my name is Amelia.
I living with my parents in Jakarta.
I have one brother and one sister.
The reason I'm Joined this site for learn english and looking for friends.
I like friends with everyone.
Sometimes when I'm bored, I just go to badroom turn on my computer watching youtube, browsing, playing games computer like the sims or puzzle and chatting with someone.
I have bestfriends from university.
I can't meet them in the weekdays because we're to busy at office.
I usually hang out with them in the weekend.

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- Hi, my name is Amelia.
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- I living with my parents in Jakarta.
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- I have one brother and one sister.
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- The reason I'm Joined this site for learn english and looking for friends.
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- I like friends with everyone.
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- Sometimes when I'm bored, I just go to badroom turn on my computer watching youtube, browsing, playing games computer like the sims or puzzle and chatting with someone.
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- I have bestfriends from university.
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- I can't meet them in the weekdays because we're to busy at office.
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- I usually hang out with them in the weekend.
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