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  • Swiming is fantastic sport and habit,Ali said to Namer beacuse Namer had told Ali he didnt knows do swim.
  • We all have agree with Ali ,but Namer since he was born he didnt see pool,Unless in TV ,Becuse his parents were poor and never had a journy.
  • So when would helearn? he always dearm a moment he do swimming, I belive by saying"The thing you didnt try it,Your loves to him will grow untill try it" Namer untill 22 years of his age he doesnot learn how to swim.

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    • We all have agree with Ali ,but Namer since he was born he didnt see pool,Unless in TV ,Becuse his parents were poor and never had a journy.
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    • So when would helearn? he always dearm a moment he do swimming, I belive by saying"The thing you didnt try it,Your loves to him will grow untill try it" Namer untill 22 years of his age he doesnot learn how to swim.
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