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Text from ngoisaolacloi - English

please help me.
I have many friend, so i felt nice as i talk with my friens.
My monitor is very talkative and he alway smiles.he usually create laughter for us.
After i go to my room.
I feel very happy because everybody corrected my lesson.
My major is accounting but i really like English.
In this evening, i and my friend are going to the Evening market.
Which has many thing, for example: clothes, decoration, food, gift and another thing.
At the end,thanks you for reading my lesson. A nice evening

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- I have many friend, so i felt nice as i talk with my friens.
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Sentence 2
- My monitor is very talkative and he alway smiles.he usually create laughter for us.
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Sentence 3
- After i go to my room.
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- I feel very happy because everybody corrected my lesson.
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- My major is accounting but i really like English.
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Sentence 6
- In this evening, i and my friend are going to the Evening market.
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- Which has many thing, for example: clothes, decoration, food, gift and another thing.
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Sentence 8
- At the end,thanks you for reading my lesson. A nice evening
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