Düzeltmeler

VincenzoGL'den mesaj - English

  • Translate description of video

  • Hello, Can you please help and correct this text: Sky is close, my first fly on paraglide I was always afraid of high (mean to be high above earth), but I want also to jump with parachute.
  • And finaly last summer I was ready (I have a desicion to jump finaly), but after last time I stop smoking I have 20kg more weight and was not good by weight, witch maximum was 80 or 90kg, but I was weighted 112kg) Insted to fly on paraglider it is maximum weight 120kg, so I finnaly made my dream come true.
  • Ok, almost made, but I will jump with parachute for sure when I was lose weight.
  • Here is original in russian, if you know russian: Я всегда боялся высоты и при этом давно хотел спрыгнуть с парашютом:) И вот прошлым летом наконец решился, но когда бросал курить набрал 20 кг и не подходил по весу, 80 или 90кг ограничение на прыжок с инструктором, а я весил 112.
  • Зато при полете на параплане ограничение было 120кг и я наконец осуществил свою мечту:) Ладно, почти осуществил, но с парашютом я все равно прыгну, когда похудею:) And here is link to this video on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7_7HcvpgQMA

Lütfen, Her cümleyi düzeltmek için yardım edin ! - English

  • Başlık
  • cümle 1
    • Hello, Can you please help and correct this text: Sky is close, my first fly on paraglide I was always afraid of high (mean to be high above earth), but I want also to jump with parachute.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 1YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
  • cümle 2
    • And finaly last summer I was ready (I have a desicion to jump finaly), but after last time I stop smoking I have 20kg more weight and was not good by weight, witch maximum was 80 or 90kg, but I was weighted 112kg) Insted to fly on paraglider it is maximum weight 120kg, so I finnaly made my dream come true.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 2YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 2
  • cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • Here is original in russian, if you know russian: Я всегда боялся высоты и при этом давно хотел спрыгнуть с парашютом:) И вот прошлым летом наконец решился, но когда бросал курить набрал 20 кг и не подходил по весу, 80 или 90кг ограничение на прыжок с инструктором, а я весил 112.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
  • cümle 5
    • Зато при полете на параплане ограничение было 120кг и я наконец осуществил свою мечту:) Ладно, почти осуществил, но с парашютом я все равно прыгну, когда похудею:) And here is link to this video on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7_7HcvpgQMA
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 5YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5