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Text from JoJo149 - English

  • MY FRIEND

  • Her name is Mi and she is twenty seven years old .
  • she lives in France she doesn't live with her family because she is working outside she works for a restaurant she doesn't have free time so much because she is very busy with her work she is usually give money for her parents she is still young and alone .
  • she want to travel Europe from end to end

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English