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Please help me to learn english
Hi all , i'm new here and i like to learn english i hope you all accept me here , i want to a some help for correct my short phrases

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- Please help me to learn english
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- Hi all , i'm new here and i like to learn english i hope you all accept me here , i want to a some help for correct my short phrases
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1