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Mid-autumn
Today is the mid-autumn in Vietnam .
Children are very nice Because they will receive a cake , candy and sift from their parents.
If you live in Vietnam that you will excite today .

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- Mid-autumn
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句子 1
- Today is the mid-autumn in Vietnam .
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句子 2
- Children are very nice Because they will receive a cake , candy and sift from their parents.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- If you live in Vietnam that you will excite today .
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3