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Hello everbody
Hello everbody.
I want to improve me english skills and so i´m here.
i studi at a university of cooperative education but my english is very bad...
for my studi and my job, it´s important that i learn english.
so i hope this website and comunity can help me.
if you have ideas which i can lern your language very fast and intensive please say it my. if your are intrestet to help me more i will afried when we can speake on skype.
with best greets

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- Hello everbody.
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- I want to improve me english skills and so i´m here.
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- i studi at a university of cooperative education but my english is very bad...
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- for my studi and my job, it´s important that i learn english.
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- so i hope this website and comunity can help me.
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- if you have ideas which i can lern your language very fast and intensive please say it my. if your are intrestet to help me more i will afried when we can speake on skype.
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- with best greets
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