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  • Landscape on canvas.

  • I took the box of colors tempera.I brushes are dry after the last time Fortunately in the attic there is still many object when I painted.I am not able to paint the landscape.
  • There is always something that I dislike.
  • I hope that I am very critic for myself but it is necessary for ameliorate.
  • Today however I paint a perfect landscape.
  • I am painting the landscape in the night.
  • The black is the dominant colour for the middle of the canvas.
  • There is other colour in this sky like grey and dark blue.
  • It seems one dark night when the stars and the moon are not so bright.
  • The rest of canvas has a field of red flowers.
  • All it is dimly lit.

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