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Text from RizkyRinjani - English

  • try to learn

  • Hi! my name Rizky Rinjani i'm from palembang South Sumatera,i'm join this club because i want to learn english,french and hebrew..
  • and i'm also can speak english litle bit,.
  • first let me tell you about my life, i am a second children from 3 brothers i have a big brother his name Randy Restu rinjani And i also have litte sister,her name is Reysha Rahmalia Rinjani my big brother has a college at Islamic University of Indonesia in Yogyakarta,and i am school at Madrasah Aliyah also known islamic high school at my city now i am X grade i'am learning english when i am 7 years old,and when i am 13 years old i has a course at english training..
  • now i am know a lot of vocabullary and my grammar is so bad,..
  • and i still learn a lot english language,and i am also interesting to learn french language,and hebrew,because both language is popular..
  • and at least i hope you can understand me,and can correct me if i wrong.. thanks.. :)

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    • Hi! my name Rizky Rinjani i'm from palembang South Sumatera,i'm join this club because i want to learn english,french and hebrew..
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    • first let me tell you about my life, i am a second children from 3 brothers i have a big brother his name Randy Restu rinjani And i also have litte sister,her name is Reysha Rahmalia Rinjani my big brother has a college at Islamic University of Indonesia in Yogyakarta,and i am school at Madrasah Aliyah also known islamic high school at my city now i am X grade i'am learning english when i am 7 years old,and when i am 13 years old i has a course at english training..
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    • and i still learn a lot english language,and i am also interesting to learn french language,and hebrew,because both language is popular..
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