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Working Condition
It takes 15minutes to go to work from my home.
In the facility, we can turn on the light because we can see radar scope in the light and temperature is always 22C so sometimes we wear a jacket in the summer.
WE have a gym and a shower room in our facility so we can use our rest time.

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句子 1
- It takes 15minutes to go to work from my home.
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句子 2
- In the facility, we can turn on the light because we can see radar scope in the light and temperature is always 22C so sometimes we wear a jacket in the summer.
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句子 3
- WE have a gym and a shower room in our facility so we can use our rest time.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3