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Birdwatching
I started birdwatching a few days ago.
Many people things watching birds is boring, but it's really enjoyable.
If you planning the take photograph of birds, you should have a professional camera.
And better you get a binoculars.
If you need a guide, i advice the guides of National Geograpic.
There was many birds in Istanbul.
Their habibats harmed while city is growing.
Today mostly vicious kinds live in İstanbul.
But bosphorus still on the migration route of birds and you can see many diffirent kinds the hills around bosphorus.

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- I started birdwatching a few days ago.
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- Many people things watching birds is boring, but it's really enjoyable.
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- If you planning the take photograph of birds, you should have a professional camera.
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- And better you get a binoculars.
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- If you need a guide, i advice the guides of National Geograpic.
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- There was many birds in Istanbul.
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- Their habibats harmed while city is growing.
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- Today mostly vicious kinds live in İstanbul.
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- But bosphorus still on the migration route of birds and you can see many diffirent kinds the hills around bosphorus.
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