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motivation letter to the embassy
- My name is Abdelrhman Hamed and I’m applying for a long-term visa in order to attain my Bachelor degree in Mechanical Engineering at Ruhr University Bochum , As a mechanical engineering student I’m quite enthusiastic about obtaining my degree from Germany as one of the most leading countries at my field of Mechanics In fact the German state made great strides in the last few years encouraging international students to attain their degree in Germany . starting from abolition of the tuition fees of the most German universities, offering German language courses in order to help them to overcome language barriers and Accommodation with affordable rents and facilities that made Germany already the fourth destination for international students exceeding 11.5% of all students in Germany in 2014 [according to wissenschaft weltoffen report by DAAD] , as a great sign of success .Taking in consideration the average costs of life expenses during my study period and for all the previous reasons , I made my decision to complete my study in Germany .
- I also see the German labour market as a promising market in the upcoming years for those who are academically and linguistically qualified , As the German state has released already remarkable initiatives such as ‘’ Make it in Germany ‘’ or ‘’EU blue card system ‘’ attracting professionals from all over the world to fulfill the German market current and expected needs and the industrial sector is definitely a crucial sector in the german economy , and my ambition is to show efficiency and start my career for about two years at a big German industrial corporation .
- Abdelrhman996
October 2015
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