Korrekturen

Text von Abdelrhman996 - English

  • motivation letter

  • I have chosen Ruhr university of Bochum for its international reputation in teaching and research of Mechanical Engineering , the university offers its students high standard practical training and internships they need ,which is crucial factor of the process of educating qualified engineers prepared for the labour market .
  • Since I have chosen to specialize in engineering and applied sciences I have worked hard to get a seat at the university, getting first place in my toppers high school with a perfect score (99.63%) , I had all the passion to start my university study ,Although I achieved (very good ) grade in my first university year, I crashed with the fact of the lack of potentials and fund allocated for the learning process with almost no chance for practical application for what we are being taught .
  • Which is the major obstacle for me to become that qualified engineer I have been always looking forward to .

BITTE, hilf jeden Satz zu korrigieren! - English

  • Titel
  • Satz 1
    • I have chosen Ruhr university of Bochum for its international reputation in teaching and research of Mechanical Engineering , the university offers its students high standard practical training and internships they need ,which is crucial factor of the process of educating qualified engineers prepared for the labour market .
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  • Satz 2
    • Since I have chosen to specialize in engineering and applied sciences I have worked hard to get a seat at the university, getting first place in my toppers high school with a perfect score (99.63%) , I had all the passion to start my university study ,Although I achieved (very good ) grade in my first university year, I crashed with the fact of the lack of potentials and fund allocated for the learning process with almost no chance for practical application for what we are being taught .
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    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2
  • Satz 3