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  • The university has a complete language center where I have been admitted to , starting from January 2016 in order to improve my German to reach the sufficient level to begin my degree programme , and suitable accommodation near from the operated by AkaFö Student Servicess, Besides its international nature with about 4000 current international student, I believe it is the quite promising choice for international students .

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    • The university has a complete language center where I have been admitted to , starting from January 2016 in order to improve my German to reach the sufficient level to begin my degree programme , and suitable accommodation near from the operated by AkaFö Student Servicess, Besides its international nature with about 4000 current international student, I believe it is the quite promising choice for international students .
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