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busy day
Today, I get up at eight oclock，i have breatfast is at ten.
I donging homework at from1p.m to 4p.m .This is a busy and briod day!!!!!!

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- busy day
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句子 1
- Today, I get up at eight oclock，i have breatfast is at ten.
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句子 2
- I donging homework at from1p.m to 4p.m .This is a busy and briod day!!!!!!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2