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Text from Dayuna - English

  • Music

  • Since my childhood, music is essential for me because it guides me in my daily life.
  • Indeed, music is everywhen with me : when I'm waking up, when I'm taking a shower...
  • What's more motivating than a music when you're running ?
  • Moreover, play piano is one of my passion, so music is for me a way to express youself.
  • According to his fonction, the manner to listen the music varries : if I'm on a bus I would prefer an Ipod with headphones whereas if I'm with some friend outside, I would chose my phone.
  • Still, I enjoy use record player because the music sounds different : with this old charming tone.
  • With reference to my favorite kind of music, even if I'm fond of rock, I would say I prefer electro.
  • This is the only register able to represents and give any emotions, and that without lyrics.
  • Indeed, when I came backafter a tough day, listennning music is my favorite way to feel better.
  • That's where we grasp the extent of the music's power : it can influence us down to the smallest detail of our lives.

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