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One day
I would like to improve my english so I write here in order to someone correct my mistakes.
Today, I was in school, I learn a lot about medias and telecom.
My teachers talk so much but there are interesting.
I don't know what i can say but it's only for improve my english so please could you correct my mystakes?
Tomorrow i write something else about my day. Good night

Elsaa_October 2015투표하세요!
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- One day
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문장 1
- I would like to improve my english so I write here in order to someone correct my mistakes.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- Today, I was in school, I learn a lot about medias and telecom.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- My teachers talk so much but there are interesting.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I don't know what i can say but it's only for improve my english so please could you correct my mystakes?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- Tomorrow i write something else about my day. Good night
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5