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  • Illness

  • This story is not real.
  • I was getting a shower when my young brother shooted.
  • I wiped myself, dressed up and got out the bathroom.
  • I went to the living room and I saw him: he was pale so I took his temperature.
  • He had an abnormal high temperature.
  • I then called the doctor in order to know if his room was open, and it was.
  • I made the dog sleep, I then quitted the house with my brother.
  • We carried him until the doctor's room.
  • "Enter, he said, what does he have?" "A high temperature" I answered "Okay, let's examine him." Fortunately there was noone in the waiting room.
  • I was reading a magazine entitled "Take care of a baby... not always easy".
  • Then the doctor get out of his room and called me.
  • "He is not very sick, I just give you some advices to decrease his temperature".
  • He did, and we got out.

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