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  • My Life

  • My name is Arifin.
  • I live at Pekanbaru, Riau Province, Indonesia.
  • I have live not just in one place.
  • I always move from one place to another place. why? because my mother is a teacher, and I have to follow her. but, it was about 2 years ago. now, we are going back to our first place, our home town. she is so happy because she don't need to moving around. but, I think I don't feel the same, I think I can't thinking out of the box when I'm in my hometown. because people in that place is still thinking like people used to be. they don't really care about technology or about education. but, sometimes I wonder that I can change their mind slowly, and change their perspective about this life.

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    • I always move from one place to another place. why? because my mother is a teacher, and I have to follow her. but, it was about 2 years ago. now, we are going back to our first place, our home town. she is so happy because she don't need to moving around. but, I think I don't feel the same, I think I can't thinking out of the box when I'm in my hometown. because people in that place is still thinking like people used to be. they don't really care about technology or about education. but, sometimes I wonder that I can change their mind slowly, and change their perspective about this life.
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