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  • Crowdfunding

  • You sitting at your desk at this moment with a very innovative idea but not enough money to start your own business?
  • Maybe crowdfunding is just the right thing for you.
  • This is when lots of people invest a little money in a start-up business, which is where the name crowdfunding come from.
  • You put a profile of your idea on the internet and after they read it and thought about it, people decide if they want to invest.
  • A few months ago a friend of mine needed money to launch the film he makes.
  • At the time he worked part-time as a teacher but he hadn't earned enough for his film project.
  • He had found it hard to get big investors but then he had heard about crowdfunding.
  • He described his business plan and offered people free cinema tickets if they invested.
  • He was so successful that he does it again for his next film.
  • It is thought that the first crowdfunding project was for a rock band in 1997.
  • The fans gave ,000 so that the band canned go on tour.
  • In the last few years, because more and more people started using the internet, crowdfunding became a good alternative for more potential business people.

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