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  • ideal house

  • I have always lived in a big city with crowded trade centres, metro, traffic jams and noisy streets.
  • I cant say that I like it but may be I just got used to live in such invironment.
  • I havent tryed to live another way yet.
  • A big city is the big apportunities.
  • I like to catch apportunities, I like futuristic city architecture that is wonder of the engineer thought.
  • Because of this the ideal house for me is a big building in bedroom community of city.
  • The building must not look like just a big box.
  • It must be something interest, angular with complex architecture but simmetric.
  • It must has underground parking.
  • It optimally for planning of surrounding area and for people who live in this house.I am not follower of luxury but I think that all must be convinient and optimally.
  • The pool and rest area situated on the roof in order to neighboors could meet together and have a rest or celebrate.
  • Flats are not big.
  • The building is provided by intellectual electronic systems which provide saving of electrical power for example or harvesting of rain water.
  • The building must has good natural ventilation.
  • It is surrounded by bushes and flower-beds.
  • In centre of group from these houses park is located.
  • A big city is the place of big apportunities and big ambitions.
  • May be when I will have all that I would wanted have I will live in a countryside in another type of house and while I was looking on sunset I would be thinking how it is beautyfully.

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