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  • The Bermuda Triangle

  • THE BERMUDA TRIANGLE through the years, at one site in particular, called the Bermuda Triangle, the planes, boats and ships, usually disappear, it has made this site a mystery to many people, and it also has caused that other people try to give an answer to explain why those events has happened.
  • Meanwhile scientists say that within this triangle there is a magnetic field, which causes that ships and planes lose any communication.
  • This theory has been the more accepted, but there are some other theories which claim to explain a little more enigmatic.
  • meanwhile, some people often say that what happens on this site is caused by supernatural presences, they say there is a huge fog is making them disappear, but such theories also say there are boats ghost, filled of pirates, who kidnap boats, in fact such theories often appear in cartoons, which brings more people continue to believe in this.
  • So, the Bermuda Triangle remains being something riddle, however it is something about which we know a little, but nevertheless have some answers, that although true or not, give us an idea of what may be happening in this area.

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    • THE BERMUDA TRIANGLE through the years, at one site in particular, called the Bermuda Triangle, the planes, boats and ships, usually disappear, it has made this site a mystery to many people, and it also has caused that other people try to give an answer to explain why those events has happened.
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    • Meanwhile scientists say that within this triangle there is a magnetic field, which causes that ships and planes lose any communication.
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    • meanwhile, some people often say that what happens on this site is caused by supernatural presences, they say there is a huge fog is making them disappear, but such theories also say there are boats ghost, filled of pirates, who kidnap boats, in fact such theories often appear in cartoons, which brings more people continue to believe in this.
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    • So, the Bermuda Triangle remains being something riddle, however it is something about which we know a little, but nevertheless have some answers, that although true or not, give us an idea of what may be happening in this area.
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