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Hi everybody
Hi everybody.
My name is Selena, I come from Vietnam.
It's the second time i'm writing a paragraph on polyglot club.
I really want to make friend and practice languages skill with everybody in the world.

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- Hi everybody
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句子 1
- Hi everybody.
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句子 2
- My name is Selena, I come from Vietnam.
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句子 3
- It's the second time i'm writing a paragraph on polyglot club.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I really want to make friend and practice languages skill with everybody in the world.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4