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Text from Wejo - English

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  • Barash loves Nyusha.
  • But nobody guesses about it including Nyusha.
  • Every single day he visits her.
  • This one is not an exception.
  • Let's listen to their conversation with attention.
  • Barash wants her lover to go for a walk with him.
  • On the one hand she doesn't appreciate his love to her but on the other one she shows some interest in what he is going to present her.
  • -At 5 o'clock by the pine?
  • But what will we be doing?
  • That's all strange!
  • For what all these appointments?
  • If you want to tell me something do it now...Only a walk?
  • I don't like this ambiguity!
  • I need to check if some mattes are planned at 5...You know I have time on my hands. You are lucky!
  • So go to prepare:I don't want to get bored!
  • He goes home and starts his alarm clock on 5.
  • Then he goes on to take a chair and sits down on it.
  • While sitting he doesn't move at all.
  • He is sure to be buried in thought.
  • 7 hours later the alarm clock begins to go off very loudly.
  • - Oh no my body became like a stone.
  • I can't really move .
  • Someone help me !
  • Turn off my alarm clock!
  • A very supportive friend of his hears him shouting into all the street to hear and comes to him To be continued.....

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