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  • Ok so, the event is going to take place on the Canteras beach on October 30 and 31, when we have a considerable part of the beach dedicated to the regatta.
  • Ok that’s cool, but here is the big question… “How are we going to raise money?” First by selling tickets, which will be available online and in official points of sell.
  • The purchase of these will allow you to get seat to watch the regatta, and the price of the tickets is about 5 and 10€ depending on the seat.
  • Moreover, there are also going to be several beach bars with music, creating an attractive party vibe.
  • Of course all the money we will get from selling drinks and snacks, is going to be donated as well.
  • And finally, we already have a crowdfunding page which you can find in our official website, to make a donation.
  • In case you want to know more about us, you can visit our official page, Curecancerevent.com, you have all the information you need about our organization.
  • So that’s all, we want to give a shout-out to our sponsors because without them it would be impossible, and to all of you who have supported our initiative.

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    • Ok so, the event is going to take place on the Canteras beach on October 30 and 31, when we have a considerable part of the beach dedicated to the regatta.
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    • Ok that’s cool, but here is the big question… “How are we going to raise money?” First by selling tickets, which will be available online and in official points of sell.
      투표하세요!
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    • The purchase of these will allow you to get seat to watch the regatta, and the price of the tickets is about 5 and 10€ depending on the seat.
      투표하세요!
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    • And finally, we already have a crowdfunding page which you can find in our official website, to make a donation.
      투표하세요!
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    • In case you want to know more about us, you can visit our official page, Curecancerevent.com, you have all the information you need about our organization.
      투표하세요!
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    • So that’s all, we want to give a shout-out to our sponsors because without them it would be impossible, and to all of you who have supported our initiative.
      투표하세요!
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