Corrections

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  • the secret abuses of the US prison system

  • How could this possibly be happening ?
  • An article from the guardian published the 20th October 2015, shows one of the US prison system's failures.
  • Today, America has the biggest prison population in the world.
  • Ground of the democracy and the human rights, the United States also have dirty secrets.
  • In her article, Victoria Law describes harrowing stories of medical neglect and brutal mistreatment suffered by pregnant inmates.
  • Indeed, a 2004 survey found that 3 % of women in federal prisons and 4 % of those in state prisons were pregnant upon arrival.
  • However, several women described their miscarriages due to the dangerous lack of medical care.
  • They received no medical attention for their pregnancies and during the delivery.
  • Handcuffed during the delivery, waiting in pains without any help, in constant hungry during the pregnancy … The restrictions and confinement inherent in prisons can make pregnancy and birthing traumatic.
  • They often lose their infant in a pre-term birth.
  • Even if the delivery went well, some of these mothers spent only 24 hours with their newborn.
  • After that, they are taken back to prison without knowing where their child is going.
  • Then, after 15-22 months, the infant is not placed with a relative but with an adoptive family.
  • The government pressures the mother to sign away her parental rights.
  • The journalist Will Potter recently took part in a TED meeting.
  • He described the prisoners' treatment inside the Communications Management Unit (CMUs).
  • This is “the most secretive and experimental prison units in the US, for so-called “second-tier” terrorists”.
  • These prisoners are limited in various way: in their phone calls, in their letters or even during the visits.
  • They cannot even hug their family or friends: a bulletproof glass making a barrier.
  • If the majority of these prisoners are Muslim, some of them are “balancers”.
  • They help balance out the racial numbers, in hopes of deflecting law suits.
  • It includes animal rights and environmental activists.
  • Their are sent there only because they are “domestic” terrorists and have “anti-government beliefs”.
  • The Bill of Rights, the Constitution, freedom of speech … Let us not merely adopt these rights but make them real and respected by all.

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