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  • Cover letter

  • Dear Prof. Einstein, I am writing to you to show my interest and motivation in participating summer internship within your university advertised by my teachers at CERN.
  • I am currently a second-year student of CERN where I study computer science and electrical engineering.
  • I am very passionate about electronics, computer science and programming above all.
  • Therefore, I would like to become an engineer in this field later and I would be glad to improve these skills through this internship.
  • I would also like to study in your university because it is one of the best universities in the world according to many rankings.
  • Furthermore Japan is a leading nation in machinery, biomedical research and particulary technology with the world’s biggest robotics production.
  • To conclude I would be honored to have the opportunity to discover your country and culture.
  • For these reasons I would like to apply to your university for an internship.
  • I hope that I will have a chance to do my internship in your university.
  • Thank you for your time and consideration.
  • Yours faithfully, John Doe

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