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  • Oral heroes

  • Hello, I’m going to talk about the notion of myths and heroes.
  • To begin with, I would like to give a definition of the notion:  For me, the myth is a traditional story that represents a country’s culture.
  • For example, in the America, it is an American’s dream.
  • The hero plays the role of myths.
  •  Besides, heroes are person who are admired for their courage, outstanding qualities and their bravery.
  • People like him because they integrate myths.
  • These are legends because they had stand against society’s problems or they had overcome obstacles.
  • There is different categories of heroes:  A national hero (for example: Sportsman and frightening)  A fictions hero (for example: superhero)  A role model (for example: Actor TV)  A defender of common value (for example: Human Rights Defender) It is my framework for answer to my problematic: When can we consider that a person is a hero?
  • Do heroes have limits?
  • How the heroes are incorporated into the myths?
  • First, I’m going to speak about a national hero.
  • Sportsmen are heroes because they try to succeed to break records.
  • For example, Usain Bolt is an impressive hero because he holds world’s records of hundred metres in 9 s 58, two hundred metres in 19 s 19 and four hundred times in 36 s 84.
  • It is legendary.
  • Thanks to these performances, the people nickname him “Lightning Bolt”.
  • Besides, frightening are heroes because they risk one’s life for save people’s life.
  • Next, I’m going to speak about a fictions hero.
  • Superheroes are heroes because they had an extraordinary’s powers.
  • They are part of myths.
  • For example, Ulysse is a hero from the Grece antique because he had fought against the cyclops.
  • It is a myth because the cyclops don’t exist.
  • For the children, Superman is a hero because he has powers.
  • He can climb in the wall because of spider’s webs.
  • Besides, I’m going to speak about a role model.
  • Actors TV are heroes because they change the course of history with film which inscribe sometimes in myths.
  • For example, The love’s history of a titanic is a myth in the real context.
  • The protagonist is famous because the myth is a success for spectators.
  • To finish with, I’m going to speak about a defender of common value.
  • For example, Martin Luther king had stand against a racial discrimination in the American between black and white.
  • Or again Nelson Mandela had stand against a racial discrimination in the African.
  • A film dedicated to him: Invictus, with actor Morgan Freeman.
  • To conclude, we can consider a hero if he has qualities outstanding and if the people like him.
  • For to be a hero, he must be to stand up for values and to be the best.
  • However, there is a limit when we are a hero.
  • Because there is an anti-hero: For example, Oscar Pistorius is an anti-hero because he had killed her wife and Lance Armstrong was doped.

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