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Text from Dayuna - English

  • Music

  • According to me, I think that music is important to everyone, but this is a very controversial topic beacause people have a different tastes in music.
  • So some people prefer to play a musical intrument which means they like create music other people, listen to just music.
  • As far as I'm concerned, I know not to.
  • However, I am passionate by music, I listen to a lot.
  • It helps me to improve my mood when I am sad or angry.
  • It gives me energy to overcome negative emotions.
  • I listen to music in different ways.
  • When I play sports I prefried listening to music with headphone.
  • When I'm with my friends I prferied the music to be shared.
  • There are different kinds of music and each type have a different rôle.
  • Classical music is made relax.
  • Contrary to classical music, rock and metal allow to have the motivation.
  • As far as I'm concerned, I listen to a lot of electro.
  • I like this kind of music because it is very rythmic and it makes us want to move.
  • I do a lot of sport and doing sports I'm forced to listen to music, it is essential.
  • Listen to the electro really makes me want to play sports and to move, it give me a lot of energy.

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