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My close friend
My close friend is in relationship with someone.
She has complete control over him and even the guy is so mad for her that he does whatever she says.
I think gradually he is getting obsessed to her.
Both are addicted to each other.
But my close friend just uses him when she need something or when she need any emotional support

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- My close friend
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- My close friend is in relationship with someone.
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- She has complete control over him and even the guy is so mad for her that he does whatever she says.
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- I think gradually he is getting obsessed to her.
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- Both are addicted to each other.
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- But my close friend just uses him when she need something or when she need any emotional support
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