添削

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reallyernstpersonからのテキスト - English

  • My autumn holiday

  • Well...
  • Now I'm on holiday.
  • It means I should have a loads of free time, which I may spend with my friends watching films, walking on snowy streets or just have fun together.
  • Unfortunately, it's not so!
  • I just can't afford it! Why?
  • The main reason I have to stay home allone is my studying in high school.
  • I have a huge homework in math, two big books for reading in literature (Fortunately, they are interesting.
  • It's russian classical literature, which I actually love.), loads of tasks in physics and something else (I can't remember what...
  • It's terrible).
  • Apart of school homework I, of course, have other things to do.
  • This week my granny has birthday, so I want to finde a nice gift for her and bake a cake (To be honest, I still don't know which one.
  • There is so many good recipes!) for her birthday party.
  • Also my best friend's mum has birthday too!
  • It means I have to help my friend with her mum's party!
  • We should make a plan, decorate home, buy food for holiday dinner and then cook it, of course.
  • A planty of work, isn't it?
  • And all this things I should do during ONE week!
  • I don't feel I'm on holiday at all!

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English