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HUSBAN
Hello!
My name is Alla.
I live in industrial town Togliatti and work on the manufactoring company.
I have a husban. His name Ilya.
Hi likes hokkey and play in hokkey team.
Every day he reeds news about new games and players.
I think that he can be a hokkey manager or some another man who works in this sfere.
In our town is hokkey team named LADA.
They play in KHL.
We like wathing translations with their games on TV and stadion.

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문장 1
- Hello!
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- My name is Alla.
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- I live in industrial town Togliatti and work on the manufactoring company.
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- I have a husban. His name Ilya.
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문장 5
- Hi likes hokkey and play in hokkey team.
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문장 6
- Every day he reeds news about new games and players.
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문장 7
- I think that he can be a hokkey manager or some another man who works in this sfere.
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문장 8
- In our town is hokkey team named LADA.
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- They play in KHL.
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문장 10
- We like wathing translations with their games on TV and stadion.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10