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  • _____________________________________________________ I was born in 1993 ,And my parents is were very happy because i first son.
  • then is i started study in at 1997 in Kindergarten,after this i started study in unrwa schools from 1999 to 2009.
  • I was level in school not bad,but i was very good in science.
  • Every year i was traveled to syria with my family at summer holiday about three months ,and i visited my uncles and aunts.
  • I study in Training Institute a turning metal from 2009 to 2011,and i started work at 2011 to now,but i want change my work soon.
  • My grandmother is died at 2009,And I lost two my uncles at 2012 and 2014 because war in syria.
  • At 2012 i visited saudi arabia because religious tourism and i stay there 11 days.
  • And last year i read seven books and two novels,And this year i started learn english and web languages like (html-css3-javascript).
  • I started study in the british council at this year, my level elementary And my hobbies swim play foot ball play video games.and i hope learn english good.

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    • _____________________________________________________ I was born in 1993 ,And my parents is were very happy because i first son.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • then is i started study in at 1997 in Kindergarten,after this i started study in unrwa schools from 1999 to 2009.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • Every year i was traveled to syria with my family at summer holiday about three months ,and i visited my uncles and aunts.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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    • I study in Training Institute a turning metal from 2009 to 2011,and i started work at 2011 to now,but i want change my work soon.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • And last year i read seven books and two novels,And this year i started learn english and web languages like (html-css3-javascript).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • I started study in the british council at this year, my level elementary And my hobbies swim play foot ball play video games.and i hope learn english good.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10