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this question intoduce yourself we all asked for us in any interview i want to share with you my answer to improve it after corrected.

i am mohamed abdelgawad , twenty-one years old from egypt. i am studing in faculty of engineering ,department civil engineer .

i proud to be active member in my community , i volunteered in art2care initiative and resalah charity association . nominated to be one from 60 particpant in the world of global community champion with empower women . thanks to read and wait correct phrases to enhance my part of writing .