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My day
Hi.
Today was a tough but interesting day.
I am volunteer a few days is an important for our club.
The whole day we were preparing for the opening of the project.
In the evening I went to the gallery to see the new exhibition of passage wonders of the world.

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- My day
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句子 1
- Hi.
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句子 2
- Today was a tough but interesting day.
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句子 3
- I am volunteer a few days is an important for our club.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- The whole day we were preparing for the opening of the project.
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句子 5
- In the evening I went to the gallery to see the new exhibition of passage wonders of the world.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5