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Cold Day
Hey, my classday was funny today; I'd been late in geography then I'd forgotten my books.
I was very happy.
And after school, it was rain and I hadn't got any things to protect me.
So I'd gone home and I was soaked to the skin...

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句子 1
- Hey, my classday was funny today; I'd been late in geography then I'd forgotten my books.
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句子 2
- I was very happy.
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句子 3
- And after school, it was rain and I hadn't got any things to protect me.
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句子 4
- So I'd gone home and I was soaked to the skin...
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