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My city is cold-
Where I live, the clouds are so grey and it's raining often, this is a Rain's city, but as far as I am concerned I love it.
The weather is not good, contrary to the atmosphere.
Indeed, this is the city of artists, and I love drawing, this is the reason why I feel fine here.
The morning, when I open my window, I can see the red sun that arrive, it's beautiful.
Next I stand and blow to respire the fresh air, it is very very cold, it's the only default.
Due to that, I stand out my bed ten minutes before the hour when I am supposed I stand out.

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- My city is cold-
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Sentence 1
- Where I live, the clouds are so grey and it's raining often, this is a Rain's city, but as far as I am concerned I love it.
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Sentence 2
- The weather is not good, contrary to the atmosphere.
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- Indeed, this is the city of artists, and I love drawing, this is the reason why I feel fine here.
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- The morning, when I open my window, I can see the red sun that arrive, it's beautiful.
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- Next I stand and blow to respire the fresh air, it is very very cold, it's the only default.
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- Due to that, I stand out my bed ten minutes before the hour when I am supposed I stand out.
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