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Wallflower
He walked always in the street when he was fine, through crowd, and he watched people, rather old persons.
He didn't worked, he didn't slept and he didn't speaken to them, but he loved them.
This was probably the most crazy love in the world.
He loved them because they were human, not because each was a unique person.
While, he was a wallflower, neither of people who saw him can remember him, this is as he doesn't exist.
But he see that as an advantage, he want to just observe people, to be an observer.

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- Wallflower
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- He walked always in the street when he was fine, through crowd, and he watched people, rather old persons.
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- He didn't worked, he didn't slept and he didn't speaken to them, but he loved them.
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- This was probably the most crazy love in the world.
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- He loved them because they were human, not because each was a unique person.
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- While, he was a wallflower, neither of people who saw him can remember him, this is as he doesn't exist.
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- But he see that as an advantage, he want to just observe people, to be an observer.
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