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Train of the death-
She was in the train, alone in her compartment.
She looked through the window the landscape which was strange.
The ocean as far as the eye could see, with a white light fog.
It's was maybe the evening, or the morning, in any case she was sleepy.
She taken a moment before realize the train progressed at the surface of ocean.
She stood up and opened the window next looked at the beginning of the vehicule.
Far she could see a big and strange steel door with two sentry.

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- Train of the death-
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Sentence 1
- She was in the train, alone in her compartment.
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Sentence 2
- She looked through the window the landscape which was strange.
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- The ocean as far as the eye could see, with a white light fog.
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- It's was maybe the evening, or the morning, in any case she was sleepy.
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- She taken a moment before realize the train progressed at the surface of ocean.
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- She stood up and opened the window next looked at the beginning of the vehicule.
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- Far she could see a big and strange steel door with two sentry.
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