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Text from Val-entin - English

  • Journal

  • The service industry in China.
  • In France, in the fast-food restaurants, when you have finished eating, you are expected to clear your meal-tray, but in China you are not.
  • In France, it is a mark of respect, people consider nobody else than you can clear your meal-tray.
  • However, when one goes to a restaurant (a non-fast-food restaurant) one is not expected to clear the table… It is logical because all the related services are included in the price.
  • That is why the Chinese way of doing seems more logical to me because it is not a matter of respect since you have paid for the related services.
  • Nevertheless, I would not feel comfortable not to clear my meal-tray when I eat in a fast-food because it is part of my culture to do it (even if I know that it is acceptable not to do it in China).
  • That is why I go on clearing my meal-try… Road traffic in Shanghai.
  • It was the most disturbing thing for me when I arrived in China.
  • In Western Europe, everybody (but pedestrians) fulfill the Highway Code.
  • That is why what happened to me surprised me: pedestrian signals were green, traffic lights (for cars) were red, I wanted to cross the street but motorbikes didn’t care about the traffic regulations and did not let me cross the street.
  • And even more surprisingly, they even honked as if I was expected to let them pass by (now, I think I was) whereas according to the traffic regulations they had to stop to let me cross the street.
  • Actually, that situation happen anywhere anytime.
  • In France people tolerate that pedestrians do not fulfill the Highway Code whereas in China it seems that people tolerate that motorbikes do not fulfill it.
  • Cultural legacy in Shanghai.
  • I was very pleased to go to Jiang'an temple to discover a typical Chinese temple.
  • When I get off the subway, I was hardly surprise to see that the temple was just above the subway station!
  • A subway station had been built just below a more than 2.000 years old typical temple!
  • Moreover a lot of tourist buses were parked in the central yard of the temple: I was puzzled!
  • Before coming to China, I expected every historic site to be very-well protected but I heard some historic sites were destroyed or revamped (in a more convenient design) when the “modern Shanghai” was built.

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