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  • Many lessons we taught from our work life .
  • I learned how to managment time , self confidence and don`t afraid from puplic speaking . let`s me share some stories .
  • In day iI remeber that where lecture about what`s un do and what are fields and agencies that belonge to ?. we are ten preson attend only ,two men and eight women . when lecturer start , he asked identify our self and why we had gone ?
  • . when he asked me , really i am worried . i didn`t why but i listen to my heart .I think this happen because didn`t seat in same room with diffrent gender . now i am volunteer with un women in egypt , participate in active citizens program ,right now,I have presentation skills and become talking with women without worry .

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    • I learned how to managment time , self confidence and don`t afraid from puplic speaking . let`s me share some stories .
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    • In day iI remeber that where lecture about what`s un do and what are fields and agencies that belonge to ?. we are ten preson attend only ,two men and eight women . when lecturer start , he asked identify our self and why we had gone ?
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    • . when he asked me , really i am worried . i didn`t why but i listen to my heart .I think this happen because didn`t seat in same room with diffrent gender . now i am volunteer with un women in egypt , participate in active citizens program ,right now,I have presentation skills and become talking with women without worry .
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