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passion
Today , I want to write about passion . passion means perseverance to reach for goals . when i have a passion about thing i do , i can work 24 hours i day !!I feel passion make you in peace with your self .
I have stilled struggle to achieve my goals and make it reality .

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Sentença 1
- Today , I want to write about passion . passion means perseverance to reach for goals . when i have a passion about thing i do , i can work 24 hours i day !!I feel passion make you in peace with your self .
  Vote agora!
- Adcionar uma nova correção! - Sentença 1
Sentença 2
- I have stilled struggle to achieve my goals and make it reality .
  Vote agora!
- Adcionar uma nova correção! - Sentença 2