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- When I was young, I believed that there was the other world beyond this world I lived.
- I believed I could move over and live there as I got a bit older and arrived at the age I could understand my situation where I was in.
- But I couldn't move over even thought the time passed.
- I thought there would be some changes of me or markable changes of surroundings when it was the time that I could move across the place.
- I believed that everything would be in change at a time.
- So I waited every day for the time to come.
- I was getting order as days passed.
- Finally when I realised I had been only watching people around me changing even before I changed myself at some point, I recognised that the world I lived would never change and never be able to change.
- And actually, people that I thought changed didn't even know that they were changing or changed theirselves.
- nelling
November 2015
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