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  • Wolrd war commemoration is an important event.
  • First, it remembers taht those who gave their life to our peace are not unknows.
  • There were not just simple soldiers.
  • They were brothers, fathers, sons, neighbors, lovers, friends.
  • They fought far away from home.
  • They sacrificed their own life for our society.
  • And those who stayed at home, helped to peace too.
  • They worked more and harder.
  • So commemoration is important to do not forget them, and to pay tribute to them.
  • Second, world war killed so many people.
  • As a consequence, so many people lost loved one.
  • So world war commemoration is a way to support them.
  • Finally, world war commemoration remembers that war is not a game.
  • It is real and cruel.
  • It is full of horrors and sadness.
  • Well, human is not stronger than war.
  • So, world war commemoration is a way to thank all of wars victims and to warn us about it.

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