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Atlantide
Since some days, I have a new passion: The Atlantide.
The old civilizations had always fascinated me, but never as today.
I don't know when I began to love them...probably the cause of Professor Layton -a play on DS- which had much of mystery and archeology in their investigates.
I remembered civilization in play which's called " Aslante", and I was so excited when I discovered anything about them.
Then, I discovered on YouTube "Didichandouidoui", a youtuber who create his videos which are based of five theories, and there was one who's named " Atlantide"...

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- Since some days, I have a new passion: The Atlantide.
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문장 2
- The old civilizations had always fascinated me, but never as today.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I don't know when I began to love them...probably the cause of Professor Layton -a play on DS- which had much of mystery and archeology in their investigates.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I remembered civilization in play which's called " Aslante", and I was so excited when I discovered anything about them.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- Then, I discovered on YouTube "Didichandouidoui", a youtuber who create his videos which are based of five theories, and there was one who's named " Atlantide"...
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5