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Hello My name is Nordine.
I live in Bagnolet and i'm learning English.
I work in a hôtel in Paris and i'd like to progress on conversation.
A friend of mine gave me some advices: watch movies i like in english, read a lot ( newspapers, books) and practise with people.
I think there are good ones and i started to apply them.
I watched yesterday an english movie with Hugh Grant which name is ''about a boy'' and i started to read a times magazine article.

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- Hello My name is Nordine.
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- I live in Bagnolet and i'm learning English.
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- I work in a hôtel in Paris and i'd like to progress on conversation.
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- A friend of mine gave me some advices: watch movies i like in english, read a lot ( newspapers, books) and practise with people.
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- I think there are good ones and i started to apply them.
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- I watched yesterday an english movie with Hugh Grant which name is ''about a boy'' and i started to read a times magazine article.
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