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What i do on the holiday
Today i'm so happy because holiday today,I'm wake at 6am, I took shower.
Then i took breakfast and drink tea,After that i played video games about two hours.
Then i went to mosque because i pray pray friday.
Everybody muslim they went to mosque because pray friday is important.
After pray i return to home and i slept one hour after that i wake and i watched tv.
I took lunch about half past three,I ate fish and salad with orange juice.
In evening i watched film for Jason Statham,Now i wrote this paragraph.
I hope that appeal to you this paragraph. Thank you.

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- What i do on the holiday
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- Today i'm so happy because holiday today,I'm wake at 6am, I took shower.
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- Then i took breakfast and drink tea,After that i played video games about two hours.
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- Then i went to mosque because i pray pray friday.
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- Everybody muslim they went to mosque because pray friday is important.
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- After pray i return to home and i slept one hour after that i wake and i watched tv.
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- I took lunch about half past three,I ate fish and salad with orange juice.
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- In evening i watched film for Jason Statham,Now i wrote this paragraph.
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- I hope that appeal to you this paragraph. Thank you.
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