添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Tiziana1977からのテキスト - English

  • The robbery

  • Abruply two men appalled, during the robbery, a young pregnant woman.
  • Although the people took of aim apart for lynch, the police moved both in front that inside the bank.
  • The people's anger was palpable.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English